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Commission: Raziel by Jammerlee Commission: Raziel by Jammerlee
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Hello friend, its your friendly best buy guy :D

As your comment says you got anatomy correct, however there seems ot be troubles with perspectives.
mainly the left foot (the one facing us) is abit off in perspective, its like hes on his tipsy toe or holding it in the air. The pendant seems to be going on its own perspectives (pendant is all like "Screw you lines! I'm going this way!" ). However the rest of the parts a bit fine, and it just needs practice.

ON a side note the ax is well colored but still looks 2-d. Even though textures attempt to make up for that (good textures at that) it does not make it 3d.

I do not mean to sound like "I"LL POINT EVERY FLAW IN THIS PIC" I point these out to try to further improve in those areas.

A few suggestions is try to sketch up some axes in a 3d settings from all perspectives, keeping aware of the vanishing lines and envisioning a 3-d model of said ax

The ratings are based on the faq. It is a commission so its not going to get high ratings int he originality or impact. However Techniques a little low because not 100% unique to you and the perspective issues, however I believe your on your way. However in vision I rate you well because you got it across what type of character he is.

(I hope this helps)

Your very much on your way to be a great artist just keep pushing. ^^
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Froztfang Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
This looks really cool xD
MistressDizzy Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Excellent work Jamie! I love the way his wings sort of form a cape.
bionic-hobo Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Professional Artist
this looks utterly amazing!!
Beau-Skunk Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
Wow, you're getting very good, Jamie. :) Love your drawing style, and your coloring/shading is getting pretty impressive, and professional.
Dragonranger10 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
wow, this is sweet right color, lighting and shading is amazing!
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