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Commission: Raziel

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Lg Commission Stamp by ChaosKomori My Commission InformationIf you're interested in commissioning me please devnote or e-mail me. My terms and conditions are at the bottom.
All prices are general estimates. Final prices will be determined by contents, coloring style, complexity and size.
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Coloration of pre-existing lineart
More coloring style variety available. See gallery and/or contact to discuss. Price star

Commissioned by :iconshadowmjl:

See? I AM still alive! Anyway, oldass lineart from last year. Originally it was just meant to be lineart with flats, but the person decided to have me shade it in. Actually really proud of how the coloring has turned out, though I can see I've made a MASSIVE improvement in my anatomy skills since penciling this @_@
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Hello friend, its your friendly best buy guy <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

As your comment says you got anatomy correct, however there seems ot be troubles with perspectives.
mainly the left foot (the one facing us) is abit off in perspective, its like hes on his tipsy toe or holding it in the air. The pendant seems to be going on its own perspectives (pendant is all like "Screw you lines! I'm going this way!" ). However the rest of the parts a bit fine, and it just needs practice.

ON a side note the ax is well colored but still looks 2-d. Even though textures attempt to make up for that (good textures at that) it does not make it 3d.

I do not mean to sound like "I"LL POINT EVERY FLAW IN THIS PIC" I point these out to try to further improve in those areas.

A few suggestions is try to sketch up some axes in a 3d settings from all perspectives, keeping aware of the vanishing lines and envisioning a 3-d model of said ax

The ratings are based on the faq. It is a commission so its not going to get high ratings int he originality or impact. However Techniques a little low because not 100% unique to you and the perspective issues, however I believe your on your way. However in vision I rate you well because you got it across what type of character he is.

(I hope this helps)

Your very much on your way to be a great artist just keep pushing. ^^
-Matt